Convergence (Fallout X MLP)

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ToonNinja
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Convergence (Fallout X MLP)

Postby ToonNinja » Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:11 pm

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ERc ... 7z9q0/edit

This is an ongoing story I've been working on, and I would LOVE some input if you have any. Commenting should be enabled, and I ask that any comments left express opinions with evidence backing it up.

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Re: Convergence (Fallout X MLP)

Postby captain_borgue » Fri Feb 15, 2013 7:12 pm

I like the idea of magic being radioactive. I think a lot of my confusion about the cast of characters stems from having never played Fallout. I think it is an interesting idea, but the weird sort of ultra-hostility the humans exude just seems, I don't know, strange. :P

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Re: Convergence (Fallout X MLP)

Postby ToonNinja » Fri Feb 22, 2013 1:54 am

Thanks for the input. And yes, the required knowledge of canon is an admitted weakness. The hostility is really more the characters than the humans, but maybe it's my bad for giving that impression. Pacer's not a good person, and this Courier is... kinda nuts.

I dunno, I've found myself starting to struggle a bit with it...


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